Be Water

I wake up like ice
Then struggle to find my flow
Be water, not steam!

In response to Writing 201 assignment, Water.

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Lisa

Hello! My name is Lisa. I find the human condition fascinating and I often write stuff about that. I blog at zenandpi.com but you can also find me on Twitter, Tumblr, and Instagram, and if you like what I do, consider signing up for my newsletter. Thanks :)

9 thoughts on “Be Water”

  1. This is great!

    Just for future reference ~ modern day haiku does not require a strict 5-7-5 syllable count. The flow is more important so an extra (or one less) syllable doesn’t disqualify it as haiku or senryu. When I first started writing, a phenomenal poet told me to always read the poem out loud, especially if editing.

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